“And that is how great grandpa Al lost his leg. “My
Dad has been telling me a story Every November 26th. It’s about this
pot that took my great grandpa’s leg. The pot has a weird face and legs
sticking out of it. The pot sits in the graveyard right beside my house. One
day I was so curious that went to the grave yard. When we got over there were
chairs for some weird reason. I went near the pot I looked into it and there
was a sound saying run Mark run. From that moment I left and never returned.
In you're story you wrote " And that's how great grandpa Al lost his leg." In you're stories you cannot use the word " that's" you cannot use this word because it is a contraction. Instead write " And THAT IS how great grandpa Al lost his leg." It is a nice story though.
ReplyDeletenice story but you have used in two times, in the 5th sentence. Also you spelled curious wrong its supposed to be curious, instead of curios.
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