100-word challenge
Greetings humans of earth, I
will like to explain to you cons of drugs. Grade 6 through 12 is usually when
kids are pressured most. Most of the time when your pressured and you
accidently say yes you’ll get addicted and when the kids ask you another time
you’ll say yes because your curious. All kids should be aware of their friend’s
potentials. My message is to all kids and parents you should know about all the negatives
of drugs because here really aren’t any positives. You might think that if you
do drugs your cool but really it’s not it just leads you to a wrong path.
When you say
ReplyDelete"accidently say yes you’ll get addicted and when the kids ask you another time you’ll say yes because your curious."
You should say
'' When you copy your friends to fit in don't , think again is your life more important? "
just a suggestion
overall interesting story, but i think you should not have a period after Greetings humans of Earth their should be a comma instead of a period
ReplyDeletein the second sentence you should have said '' I would like to explain to you THE cons of drugs''
ReplyDeletei think you forgot to put a period after potentials because you have a capital m
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